Ruben Villanueva

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I didn't always feel this animosity. I was just a mellow guy, almost soft one would say. It's hard to say how it all went so wrong, one

  • Ruben Villanueva Jun 15, 2012
    The Offer

    Cullum Jan 1, 1970

    32Votes, average: 3 out 5
    Supernatural Stories | 2 Comments

    Decent little read. If you practice writing everyday you'll become much better. try to develop character a little bit more, at the end you said "the hands pulled him down to hell where he belonged," though I dont really know why he belongs there. overall

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