Celia Schneider

3 Stories

Jim was getting ready for bed, hoping as he brushed his teeth that tonight would be the night his wife would forget work and stay with him

"Wakey, wakey boys. Cupid is here." Lyla cooed to the five boys as she made her way down the basement stairs. They lifted their heads

No, no! Please, let me out of this cell, I'm not crazy! You don't understand, he will easily find me and kill me,I can't be locked in here.

  • Celia Schneider Mar 28, 2013
    Forever

    Jason R Lloyd Jan 1, 1970

    48Votes, average: 3 out 5
    Supernatural Stories | 3 Comments

    Not a bad plot, but you use "as" for a transition WAAY too much.

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