jesus

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There I was, standing alone in the middle of the street. I looked at my watch it was 3 in the morning, my heart beating as if it was going

By jesus

  • jesus Jul 24, 2011
    The Big Old House

    nitika Jan 1, 1970

    204Votes, average: 3 out 5
    Thriller Stories | 3 Comments

    Good story,, like jagrit said maybe a little more detail about the room, you could mention if there were any windows, if there was a bed or any furniture, etc. I think its a good story,, Good job :)

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