Black rose

Supernatural Stories | May 23, 2012 | 2 min read
112 Votes, average: 4 out of 5
Judyhad seven babies. Her husband died in a crash accident three weeks ago and since then she has a ritual. Every night she put a fresh rose by each of their bed, because for her rose is a symbol of her husbands love. One day she went into a flower shop.

,,May I have seven red roses please?" she asked

,, I am so sorry but we have only six red roses. But we have black roses. Would you like one?" replied some  saleswoman. Saleswoman looked like she was around 40 but her hands was ugly and old like they are at least 70 years old.

,,Ok! I will take one" said Judy cause she thought ,,rose is a rose"

She went home and put six red roses and one black rose by her 7th  babys bed. In the morning she woke up and saw that the baby with black rose died. It was pale so it must have been strangled. She cried and cried but no for long. She tought that babys death was just a coincidence. She burried the baby (I mean she had funeral) and she continued her little love ritual.

After the funeral she again went to the flower shop. Old-young saleswoman was for some reason too happy. Judy not wanted six RED roses.

This time the saleswoman said they have five red roses and one black. Judy was a little afraid but still she took them. That night again the baby with black rose died. Judy cried and now she knew something isn't right. Again she went into a flower shop. This time demanding FIVE RED roses but as you probably know there was only four red roses and one black rose. Judy wanted to know what was going on so she took it.

That night she waited to see what will happen. At 3:00 something that looked like old arms came out of the rose. Judy started screaming. Arms took the baby and they started strangling the baby. Judy wanted to call the police but it would be to late when they come. So she took a knife and cut of the arms. And there was nothing else coming out of the rose. Arms fell on the floor still moving but she took them and burned them. She felt strangely safe.

Next day she went to the flower shop and saw that saleswoman did not have ARMS!!!

The end! PS: Let your imagination be your greatest fear :D !!!

Thanks for reading! I am new here and I would like your honest opinion for this story. Sorry for possible grammatical errors :D .
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Anitajai Jun 12, 2012

Nice story.. Loved it..good work:->

Pinay Jun 5, 2012

Nice start. Keep it up.

Jun 4, 2012

good story you got there..just a little work on the grammar and it could had been better

POpz Jun 2, 2012

bloody AWESOME XD

Kristijan Olujic May 29, 2012

Thanks I am glad you liked it :)

Kevin summlen May 28, 2012

I liked your story. it was great.

Priyanka May 24, 2012

Great work Kristijan Olujic...!!!

Akshay May 24, 2012

i read all story, It is wonderful story good work Kristijan Olujic

Amit May 24, 2012

Awesome story! keep working on your stories kristijan.

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